
Well…everyone was right. Cohen is terrible. I dislike him so much, and now I have a grounding for that feeling! I don’t mean to color your opinion of him before you’ve read the story but…consider this a warning I guess. He is not someone I’d want to associate with in real life, and the game tries to brush it off as ‘oh that’s just how it is in this country’, but that doesn’t excuse the fact that he basically tries to force himself on the main character.
OK, my rant is now over! I didn’t really have any trouble with the translation except one of the lines following a SUN choice which is:
コーエン「子猫ちゃん。。。キミって人は」
I wasn’t really sure what to do with the キミって人は so I had to do some hunting to find the right translation. I went through a couple different choices, going back and forth and then rewriting the line, but I think in the end the translation I chose was the most appropriate. At least I hope so!